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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

It's about time Éna Lí had something to fear.

Jhaerlyn's avatar

Wow, that was an intense chapter. Your words were able to put me into the impotent robes watching helpless Sen Na be dragged away. I even cursed out loud at Ena Li. Well written.

Meya's avatar

Nothing is as degrading as pulling a woman by her hair.

Dawn Glanz's avatar

"Few things gave Éna Lí more pleasure than the sight of beauty decaying. She knew, of course, that her own beauty would never decay. In this she perceived a profound superiority over all living things, but especially when those living things began to whither."

So is this Éna Lí not bounded by mortality? Or is she completely and utterly delusional?

Russell Morahan's avatar

Keep up the great work on the novel! So looking forward to reading the whole thing one day when it's published in physical form. Hope you're having fun writing it and staying inspired! Bless you mate! =) xx

Tia's avatar

Taking a break from studying for finals. And gosh, the writing the beautiful.

Selfishly, I'm quite happy both Sen Na and Lu Lin are alive

Jeff's avatar

Excellent. "...smoothed the corners of the rooftops." Wonderful.