Winter Is Always Cruel
Finally! Min La gets some sleep! And the River Voyage is a fantastic idea.
Bo Han playing whatever game it takes to avoid playing THE game.
I am enjoying this Lasoth trio. Ovor and Sen Lan’s introduction and the peek into how they communicate with eachother a number of chapters back was excellent.
Excellent. Strong dialogue and brisk pacing. Excited for next chapter!
One note, near the beginning you start 2 paragraphs with "More than that" I just found it may be a little repetitive (?)
I was experimenting stylistically with that. I suppose it wasn't quite working.
Finally! Min La gets some sleep! And the River Voyage is a fantastic idea.
Bo Han playing whatever game it takes to avoid playing THE game.
I am enjoying this Lasoth trio. Ovor and Sen Lan’s introduction and the peek into how they communicate with eachother a number of chapters back was excellent.
Excellent. Strong dialogue and brisk pacing. Excited for next chapter!
One note, near the beginning you start 2 paragraphs with "More than that" I just found it may be a little repetitive (?)
I was experimenting stylistically with that. I suppose it wasn't quite working.