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Jeff's avatar

Min La 'rubbing his fingers' will be an interesting character 'tell' to track through the remainder of the story. Thank you for sharing this with us Hilary.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you for reading it!

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

I’m looking forward to reading this tonight or tomorrow! Edit: I found time to get to it this evening! Great chapter, as always. The characterizations continue to impress!

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Meya's avatar

"which pulled the skin across his hollow cheeks like wet linen across a wooden frame" omg that description is just sooo good♡

Andd wow his own enemy now lies in his own den, how sweet !

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Hilary Layne's avatar

I did for my first ten chapters. And from time to time I'll send a chapter to a friend to read. But mostly it's just me, reading it over and over again, usually out loud.

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