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Castelleon's avatar

"Perhaps the tiles of fate had finally offered them a bit of good luck."

Now why do I get the feeling that fate has more in store for them than Min La is hoping?

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Meya's avatar

Most definitely.. this whole estate is eerie and weird

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Catherine Christianson's avatar

Good luck? Probably not.

It was a good chapter though.

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Rin Holok answered a lot of the questions I had about Von Ol's machinations. You did it well, as it did not come across like an info dump, as it could have.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you, I was hoping for that!

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Isabel's avatar

Agreed! Well said.

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Kevin Perryman's avatar

Another great read. Thank you. You are amazing.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you! (and thank you for reading!)

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