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Castelleon's avatar

"Perhaps the tiles of fate had finally offered them a bit of good luck."

Now why do I get the feeling that fate has more in store for them than Min La is hoping?

Meya's avatar

Most definitely.. this whole estate is eerie and weird

Catherine Christianson's avatar

Good luck? Probably not.

It was a good chapter though.

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Rin Holok answered a lot of the questions I had about Von Ol's machinations. You did it well, as it did not come across like an info dump, as it could have.

Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you, I was hoping for that!

Isabel's avatar

Agreed! Well said.

Kevin Perryman's avatar

Another great read. Thank you. You are amazing.

Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you! (and thank you for reading!)