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DeeKay Reader of stuffs.'s avatar

I have to say I enjoyed the very descriptive way the scene is portrayed balanced with forward progression. It really brought me into the room and the desperation of both Min La and the guards, both on the verge of disaster for varying reasons. The final resolution was nicely foreshadowed in previous chapters, so it made perfect sense for So Ga to try and save the one thing he could in a world beyond his control. Very enjoyable read.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you!

(I've been enjoying your comments on the chapters! I don't want to do too much replying, lest I give something away by mistake...)

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DeeKay Reader of stuffs.'s avatar

I totally understand, I just want you to know how much I am enjoying the story. The tiny reveals in each chapter are so satisfying when the ah ha moment hits.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you, I really appreciate it!

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Meya's avatar

I might say one of my favourite chapters. Though I can't say why

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