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Jeff's avatar

Wonderful dialogue. Excellent chapter.

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

A true catch-22 for So Ga.

Jhaerlyn's avatar

I feel like C3PO- it’s our lot in life to suffer… another chapter without knowing what’s going to happen! I like the difference in Min La’s description of Sen Li, without being totally different… same features described by different experiences… nicely done

Esther Lau's avatar

Oh no! It's a cliffhanger! I have loved this story and look forward to more to come. It's so well written and intricate.

Randall O. Watkins's avatar

Any updates on the last few chapters?

E.C. Murphy's avatar

Reading this story has moved me to laughter and absolutely caused my eyes to mist. I have been so surprised that my jaw has dropped! Ha! And here we are with yet another cliffhanger! Thank you for such a wonderful adventure!

Mac Thompson's avatar

First chance I've had to read your work.

It's brilliant and engaging.

Now I must go back to the first chapter and read everything.

Thank you for sharing your story.

Meya's avatar

It's really saddening that So Ga's safety can only be with Min La.. since almost everyone else sees him as a pawn and not as a human ☹