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Randall O. Watkins's avatar

Can’t wait for next chapter!

Jhaerlyn's avatar

Nice build up of tension, this chapter really hits the serialized feel of an adventure story, balancing the main plot with seemingly unrelated subplots to drive the story. Good chapter!

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

The ingredients for the medicine will put their pursuers on their trail.

Dawn Glanz's avatar

Ŏnin is still thinking of the uncanny likeness, I think.

Jeff's avatar

Excellent chapter ending. Building strong anticipation for the next chapter.