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Dawn Glanz's avatar

Na Nen is more than what her husband thinks her to be. The patience and skill to embroider is fearsome, and I assure you she is more clever than he gives her credit for.

Meg's avatar

I love how even the chapters without So Ga and Min La in them end with them probably dying soon.

Jeff's avatar

intrigue upon intrigue. moving forward nicely now. very good.

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

I love how the bad guys are all in it for themselves and setting up betrayals and counter-moves on their own. That is how grand schemes come crashing down.

PAL's avatar

Fine writing. Hilary, are you a book editor also? If so, can I talk to you about an assignment? Please contact me at Patricklynch700@gmail.com. Thanks.