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Jeff's avatar

Strong. Direct. Introducing new interesting characters... and another story layer that will undoubtedly fuel the next Chapters. Good work.

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ChristineB's avatar

Can someone remind me of the chapter in which we are first properly introduced to Olo Hin?

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Hilary Layne's avatar

His first appearance was in chapter 23.

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Zaklog the Great's avatar

Are you familiar with the Based Book Sale? The next one is coming up fairly soon. You might join in if you have anything that fits.

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