What an excellent stylistic choice. Both before Min La killed the fellows attacking Sen Rin and before he entered the inn, you sent an ambiguous supernatural sensation to alert us that the seemingly mundane choice Min La is going to make (to stay put, to enter the inn) will have great and unforeseeable significance and perhaps also consequences. This really draws our attention to Min La’s choices and narratively reinforces your focus on choice as a theme or topic of this work.
One of the strengths of your writing in general is your ability to create and sustain ambiguities, then resolve them just on the edge of the reader’s ability to tolerate it. This creates a very pleasing and engaging rhythm, as you like to put it.
Scent of oranges again! Now I'm suspicious of a substance but I would not be able to tell you which one it is. I have not heard of a knock-out drug that smells of oranges.
Love the writing. It's giving me insight for fantasy/political intrigue novel I want to write. I can barely imagine the amount of work put in to make such a detailed and immersive world
What an excellent stylistic choice. Both before Min La killed the fellows attacking Sen Rin and before he entered the inn, you sent an ambiguous supernatural sensation to alert us that the seemingly mundane choice Min La is going to make (to stay put, to enter the inn) will have great and unforeseeable significance and perhaps also consequences. This really draws our attention to Min La’s choices and narratively reinforces your focus on choice as a theme or topic of this work.
One of the strengths of your writing in general is your ability to create and sustain ambiguities, then resolve them just on the edge of the reader’s ability to tolerate it. This creates a very pleasing and engaging rhythm, as you like to put it.
The AI tells the story of Minute-la and SO G.A. lol.
Anyway I can’t say enough how much I like this story… and the sudden appearance of Demi-gods? Heroes? Avatars?? Something magical is afoot🤗
Radagast vibes from the old man :-)
Scent of oranges again! Now I'm suspicious of a substance but I would not be able to tell you which one it is. I have not heard of a knock-out drug that smells of oranges.
I'm really enjoying Min La's character development and how he treats So Ga ⸜(｡˃ ᵕ ˂)⸝♡
Strong Min La/Iojin conflict scene. Excellent.
Love the writing. It's giving me insight for fantasy/political intrigue novel I want to write. I can barely imagine the amount of work put in to make such a detailed and immersive world