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Dawn Glanz's avatar

I love the conversation between Lu Lin and Kio En. It is a very clever conversation for Lu Lin to come up with on the fly, and thankfully Kio En is not dense enough to miss it. I wonder at all the minutiae mentioned, though.

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Excellent characterization and subtlety of word choice and mannerisms. This chapter is my first exposure to your work, and I am impressed. I will have to start from the beginning!

Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!

Jeff's avatar

Chapter 32. Another wonderful layer added. Well done.