Oh! If you mean "begrudged her her loyalty" that one is intentional. Like when you say, "he didn't begrudge him his envy." Though it comes through a little awkward with the female pronouns.
Hi Hilary, I checked on your YouTube but couldn’t find an email address, so I’m leaving a comment here. I’m not sure if you remember, but my twin sister, Nicole, and I used to know you back in the tiny town of SM. We recently found your channel—we think it’s great—and wanted to get in touch. If that’s something you’re interested in, please email me: daringlydare@gmail.com
Glad to see you’re doing well and still writing. We are, too.
OMG?!! That cliff hanger!!!😫😫 you can't leave us with it for too long ! I'm so desperate for another chapter alreadyyy😭😭
And I'll self employ myself as your typo girly😅 though there aren't many anyways so props to you♡
from the paragraph "That Lŭ Lin Ăvan had put her loyalty to her king..." fourth sentence you just repeated the word 'her' twice
I'll happily accept the tireless efforts of the typo girly! Thank you!
(I'm going to have the next chapter up no later than the weekend)
Oh! If you mean "begrudged her her loyalty" that one is intentional. Like when you say, "he didn't begrudge him his envy." Though it comes through a little awkward with the female pronouns.
I see, I guess it was kind of an awkward way to phrase it so caught my eye (can't wait for your next update♡!!)
Hi Hilary, I checked on your YouTube but couldn’t find an email address, so I’m leaving a comment here. I’m not sure if you remember, but my twin sister, Nicole, and I used to know you back in the tiny town of SM. We recently found your channel—we think it’s great—and wanted to get in touch. If that’s something you’re interested in, please email me: daringlydare@gmail.com
Glad to see you’re doing well and still writing. We are, too.
No need to ask for forgiveness I LOVEE long chapters!!!