I'm really loving the way the relationship is building between them I just know its going to get wholesome! Alsoo theres a typo near the beginning where you wrote 'So Go' instead of 'So Ga'
The worst part about catching up to a series is having to wait for every new part. Really love everything so far, it's well-paced, thought out, and the Min La chapters especially have such a strong message behind them, without it being heavy handed. Looking forward to the next chapter!
P.S, there's a typo in chapter 7, "The king, she remembered, had wanted to chose [choose] boys from among the palace House"
Super looking forward to reading the whole novel when it's out in hard copy! Right now, each chapter is a tantalizing reminder of the story that awaits me. =)
Off Topic: If you like Synthwave - here's my fav magical synthwave mix to inspire you on your writing journey!
Each chapter is stronger than the prior one... excellent work. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Thank you! And thank you for reading it
I'm really loving the way the relationship is building between them I just know its going to get wholesome! Alsoo theres a typo near the beginning where you wrote 'So Go' instead of 'So Ga'
Thank you, I see it now! I'll get that corrected!
Go Lán? Never heard of Go Lán before. Sounds like Houseless mischief to me.
I am really enjoying this story, Hillary! I came here from your fantastic Youtube channel.
Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying it!
The worst part about catching up to a series is having to wait for every new part. Really love everything so far, it's well-paced, thought out, and the Min La chapters especially have such a strong message behind them, without it being heavy handed. Looking forward to the next chapter!
P.S, there's a typo in chapter 7, "The king, she remembered, had wanted to chose [choose] boys from among the palace House"
Waiting hurtss💔💔
Super looking forward to reading the whole novel when it's out in hard copy! Right now, each chapter is a tantalizing reminder of the story that awaits me. =)
Off Topic: If you like Synthwave - here's my fav magical synthwave mix to inspire you on your writing journey!
https://youtu.be/gsEK5-hbLnA?si=NhvCgDpfyarJdyGQ
Have fun with your writing! Cheers!