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Meya's avatar

I'm really loving the way the relationship is building between them I just know its going to get wholesome! Alsoo theres a typo near the beginning where you wrote 'So Go' instead of 'So Ga'

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you, I see it now! I'll get that corrected!

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Jeff's avatar

Each chapter is stronger than the prior one... excellent work. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you! And thank you for reading it

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Castelleon's avatar

The worst part about catching up to a series is having to wait for every new part. Really love everything so far, it's well-paced, thought out, and the Min La chapters especially have such a strong message behind them, without it being heavy handed. Looking forward to the next chapter!

P.S, there's a typo in chapter 7, "The king, she remembered, had wanted to chose [choose] boys from among the palace House"

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Meya's avatar

Waiting hurtss💔💔

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