Loving the book so far. I enjoy slower paced stories that allow for deeper immersion.
Possible typo in the large paragraph near the end starting "The hall was indeed crowded": there is a "must" that reads like it should have been a "much" by the phrasing.
Glad to be blessed with another chapter! I know I'd be repeating what you might've heard many times already, but really the writing is soo good and immersive in a way i can't begin to understand. Also side note: its probably a typo "there's was" a few sentences above "It was not just to retrieve food for So Ga...." somewhere in the middle I can't really explain
It's a very small part of the chapters, but I love how you write food. Reminds me of Redwall.
Thank you! I always enjoy thinking about the food. I wish more books described it, I think it's such an interesting aspect of a culture.
Loving the book so far. I enjoy slower paced stories that allow for deeper immersion.
Possible typo in the large paragraph near the end starting "The hall was indeed crowded": there is a "must" that reads like it should have been a "much" by the phrasing.
Thank you! Good catch (I had to read it three times to see it). Fixed!
Just found this book today and absolutely hooked. I'll keep a keen eye out for new chapters. Thank you very much for writing it!!
Thank you for reading it! I'm really happy you're enjoying it!
Glad to be blessed with another chapter! I know I'd be repeating what you might've heard many times already, but really the writing is soo good and immersive in a way i can't begin to understand. Also side note: its probably a typo "there's was" a few sentences above "It was not just to retrieve food for So Ga...." somewhere in the middle I can't really explain
Thank you! I love reading your comments as you go along; it makes me happy to see someone enjoying the story so much.
I see the typo, thank you! I'll blame my lingering summer cold, but thanks for catching it!