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Castelleon's avatar

It's a very small part of the chapters, but I love how you write food. Reminds me of Redwall.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you! I always enjoy thinking about the food. I wish more books described it, I think it's such an interesting aspect of a culture.

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Dawn Glanz's avatar

Just found this book today and absolutely hooked. I'll keep a keen eye out for new chapters. Thank you very much for writing it!!

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you for reading it! I'm really happy you're enjoying it!

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Meya's avatar

Glad to be blessed with another chapter! I know I'd be repeating what you might've heard many times already, but really the writing is soo good and immersive in a way i can't begin to understand. Also side note: its probably a typo "there's was" a few sentences above "It was not just to retrieve food for So Ga...." somewhere in the middle I can't really explain

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you! I love reading your comments as you go along; it makes me happy to see someone enjoying the story so much.

I see the typo, thank you! I'll blame my lingering summer cold, but thanks for catching it!

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