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Athena's avatar

This is beautiful in the way the oil sizzling in a stainless steel pan is. It makes you flinch and step away and then think. I love how all your content not only encourages thinking but also causes it.

Underrated skill tbh

> Just as sea sits at elbow of land, so death at the elbow of

memory, lapping at the edges of it, greedy, like all lonely things.

>...nor the color of your voice

> And then the fog cleared and I was alone.

And then I woke and I was alone.

The rhythm in this oof. Thank you for writing and posting.

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Hilary Layne's avatar

Thank you! (I am also drawn to things that surprise my mind into thought.)

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