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DeeKay Reader of stuffs.'s avatar

So devious! I am again amazed at how intricate and toxic this society is. Any offered friendship is seen as plotting, so everyone plots and maneuvers to appear neutral. You have the golden goose, but it is a viper waiting to strike. The only smart move is to say they asked to go and I did my duty as a loyal subject and followed orders.

Meg's avatar

Arg! I was hoping they would be safe from Olo Hin for a while. I suppose the manhunt must go on…

Jhaerlyn's avatar

I really am enjoying how you deliver the expected in unexpected or interesting ways. Finding a possible ally who at the same time can’t possibly protect them is a masterful stroke of efficiency: you gave us the rescue, but maintain the sense of urgency; you gave us a surprise with someone knowing the truth about who they are, but use that to give us a deeper look into the complexities of this society and house interactions.

Meya's avatar
Jan 4Edited

Something about min la being misjudged for being the prince himself.. maybe he's more suited for the role but he doesn't know it yet. Fitting comeback for his house too

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Tá Nom helped them, but they are only back to square one and without their possessions.

Jeff's avatar

Another piece of the puzzle is on the board. I expected them to be held by Koda for a longer period of time.

Jhaerlyn's avatar

I was actually hoping that he would convince his captors of their importance to the king and be a way of restoring their house to get out from under the Oklo ....

Jhaerlyn's avatar

O.o already!? Your a machine!