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Meg's avatar

Arg! I was hoping they would be safe from Olo Hin for a while. I suppose the manhunt must go on…

Jhaerlyn's avatar

I really am enjoying how you deliver the expected in unexpected or interesting ways. Finding a possible ally who at the same time can’t possibly protect them is a masterful stroke of efficiency: you gave us the rescue, but maintain the sense of urgency; you gave us a surprise with someone knowing the truth about who they are, but use that to give us a deeper look into the complexities of this society and house interactions.

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