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Jan 8Edited

Hilary, this is becoming a 3D chess game... and I have difficulty with checkers. But I'm hanging on as best I can :) This was a beautifully written and paced chapter. Kudos.

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I cannot help but conjure the image of So Ga and Min La having a mental breakdown as they are continually surrounded by armies in the mists... Never far never closer.

This is so wonderfully crafted I get a rush of excitement when another clue drops like a feather. Unexpected and easily unnoticed but there none the less.

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