Discussion about this post

User's avatar
Isabel's avatar

What an excellent stylistic choice. Both before Min La killed the fellows attacking Sen Rin and before he entered the inn, you sent an ambiguous supernatural sensation to alert us that the seemingly mundane choice Min La is going to make (to stay put, to enter the inn) will have great and unforeseeable significance and perhaps also consequences. This really draws our attention to Min La’s choices and narratively reinforces your focus on choice as a theme or topic of this work.

One of the strengths of your writing in general is your ability to create and sustain ambiguities, then resolve them just on the edge of the reader’s ability to tolerate it. This creates a very pleasing and engaging rhythm, as you like to put it.

Expand full comment
Jhaerlyn's avatar

The AI tells the story of Minute-la and SO G.A. lol.

Anyway I can’t say enough how much I like this story… and the sudden appearance of Demi-gods? Heroes? Avatars?? Something magical is afoot🤗

Expand full comment
5 more comments...

No posts

Ready for more?