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Meya's avatar

OMG?!! That cliff hanger!!!😫😫 you can't leave us with it for too long ! I'm so desperate for another chapter alreadyyy😭😭

And I'll self employ myself as your typo girly😅 though there aren't many anyways so props to you♡

from the paragraph "That Lŭ Lin Ăvan had put her loyalty to her king..." fourth sentence you just repeated the word 'her' twice

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Elisha Monger's avatar

Great chapter. I have been suspecting the Min La is Nŭnon reveal for a while.

Possible typo towards the middle: should the "his" in "even his own House" actually be "her"? In context, "her" makes more sense.

"Min La understood the strangeness of the Grand Steward’s choice. Lŭ Lin Ăvan was a subject of much speculation in all the Houses of Láokoth, even his own House."

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