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Lewis's avatar

I can see the mini arcs concept at play from your videos. "Will he get the enlo cake? Actually...No. No he won't." They say so much about why he wants them and it's so seemingly mundane, which at first I was like "Why do I want to read this?" to then thinking "yeah okay, this is fun". The synopsis or summary of the story overview helped push me a bit because I know, more or less, where this will go so now I'm curious to see how we go from this to that. Oh but I'm also a little scared. Drama is so hard for me.

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Darryl's avatar

I have been looking forward to reading your work after watching your YT videos. I finally got a chance today and I like the style as well as the characters so I will be reading more. I would like to binge through this interesting tale but do to time constraints I will instead treat it like Enlo Cakes and savor each morsel. I quite like how you have set the stage with a very relaxed atmosphere yet the underlying threat of assassination creating the need for subterfuge. I can tell I am going to enjoy the character interactions as much as the main plot. I have a hard time finding authors I enjoy these days so I am glad your videos led me here.

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