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Isabel's avatar

Marvelous world building!

I really like your choice of the word “dreth.” It combines the sounds and associations of the words dread, dreck and death. That reminds me of how C. S. Lewis named his demons for the Screwtape Letters.

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I like how they're called níothrim and not mortals, a nice linguistic detail, since the Romans do not exist here! There's a real sense of a larger world that exists in the background, which is exactly the kind of thing that fantasy needs more of, and arguably, is the soul of true fantasy.

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