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Elisha Monger's avatar

Loving the book so far. I enjoy slower paced stories that allow for deeper immersion.

Possible typo in the large paragraph near the end starting "The hall was indeed crowded": there is a "must" that reads like it should have been a "much" by the phrasing.

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Castelleon's avatar

It's a very small part of the chapters, but I love how you write food. Reminds me of Redwall.

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